Feel free to check and review (mm)

[presli]

Well this is my first website and it's with a free hosting and domain, so don't be so hard on me after viewing it :P
This is link to it -.-

Give some suggestions on improving it :P

[Kay]

I think it looks good, presli! I just have a few small things I'd mention. The text is a little cramped looking in your homepage. The bottom of your post where the Contact page link is needs some space between that and the ads.

I'd increase the font size a little there to the size you used on the Traffic page and change the font color to white rather than gray to make it stand out more. You also could space out your paragraphs a little more in the posts.

You need some additional content in your sidebar to balance the page.

Your header at the top I would say needs more branding. It just looks like an ad rather than a header for your site. Even if you just added your name to it, that would make a difference. The way it is, I'd never remember your site name and you want to burn that into people's brains any chance you get.

One last thing - I'd keep the forum link hidden for now until it has some content for people to see uploaded to it. Personally I wouldn't have a section there asking people to post their payment proofs, especially not screenshots. They're too easy to fake and may get you in hot water if your site's the reason someone believes some lies someone tells them about their earnings or takes their information and uses it. Not everyone's smart enough to blank out their account information unfortunately.

If you really want them to give a screenshot, make it clear they must remove identifying information before posting it to safeguard yourself. It would be better to encourage them to simply write about it in a post instead of displaying a screenshot, I feel.

Other than those small points, I think it's looking great. You can take them or leave them of course. You're off to an excellent start. Keep up the good work and best of luck with it all. Please do ask if you have any questions.

[Gassar]

wow excellent.......!

Really liked it..

[presli]

I think it looks good, presli! I just have a few small things I'd mention. The text is a little cramped looking in your homepage. The bottom of your post where the Contact page link is needs some space between that and the ads.

I'd increase the font size a little there to the size you used on the Traffic page and change the font color to white rather than gray to make it stand out more. You also could space out your paragraphs a little more in the posts.

You need some additional content in your sidebar to balance the page.

Your header at the top I would say needs more branding. It just looks like an ad rather than a header for your site. Even if you just added your name to it, that would make a difference. The way it is, I'd never remember your site name and you want to burn that into people's brains any chance you get.

One last thing - I'd keep the forum link hidden for now until it has some content for people to see uploaded to it. Personally I wouldn't have a section there asking people to post their payment proofs, especially not screenshots. They're too easy to fake and may get you in hot water if your site's the reason someone believes some lies someone tells them about their earnings or takes their information and uses it. Not everyone's smart enough to blank out their account information unfortunately.

If you really want them to give a screenshot, make it clear they must remove identifying information before posting it to safeguard yourself. It would be better to encourage them to simply write about it in a post instead of displaying a screenshot, I feel.

Other than those small points, I think it's looking great. You can take them or leave them of course. :} You're off to an excellent start. Keep up the good work and best of luck with it all. Please do ask if you have any questions.

Thank you for the big and helpful report about my site
Since its my first site, i kinda gave up on it and i'm done working on it since its without its own hosting and domain, but the next one i make will be much better. Anyway about the header .. i know that the name is crap, but this was my first "start" name, but its still there for more then 3 months so far :} About the sidebar - i'm always trying to put some more things to it, but the options are really limited ... i tryed to put the clock there, but unfortunatly its impossible, same as banners or any ads, widgets etc :S About the forum - no one is writting on it Even me ... i gave up on it - i kinda used it only to show the payment proofs ( all the payment proofs are uploaded by me and are with erased ID numbers of course ). About the grey color - well the templeats are ready and i can't really make a big changes to them, but the gray combined with blue looks nice on my opinion :P Right now i am getting a few free clicks on my site and sometimes a new referrals to my programs so it is working good enought for its purpuses (: I also make like 1$/day from adsense, but i've got the bad feeling that my account will be closed from there :S anyway, that was a little off-topic
Thx once again for the great review :]

[ankur0412]

hey, the link isn't opening at my place. any problems with it?

[presli]

hey, the link isn't opening at my place. any problems with it?

Really ?! It is openning properly for me -.-
Try typing www.preslibaby.webs.com if you still can't open it

[Kay]

Thank you for the big and helpful report about my site
Since its my first site, i kinda gave up on it and i'm done working on it since its without its own hosting and domain, but the next one i make will be much better. Anyway about the header .. i know that the name is crap, but this was my first "start" name, but its still there for more then 3 months so far :} About the sidebar - i'm always trying to put some more things to it, but the options are really limited ... i tryed to put the clock there, but unfortunatly its impossible, same as banners or any ads, widgets etc :S About the forum - no one is writting on it Even me ... i gave up on it - i kinda used it only to show the payment proofs ( all the payment proofs are uploaded by me and are with erased ID numbers of course ). About the grey color - well the templeats are ready and i can't really make a big changes to them, but the gray combined with blue looks nice on my opinion :P Right now i am getting a few free clicks on my site and sometimes a new referrals to my programs so it is working good enought for its purpuses (: I also make like 1$/day from adsense, but i've got the bad feeling that my account will be closed from there :S anyway, that was a little off-topic
Thx once again for the great review :]

You're welcome. Do I need to beg you before you'll hit the thanks button on my post? Just asking since I'm not above doing so LOL.

Glad you took it in the spirit it was intended ie constructive criticism. If you're going to be making your site on your own domain next time, you could try WordPress. It's free and there's loads of templates for that come ready made with slots that allow you to incorporate ads and so on very easily. Check out the Blogging folder here for some more info on WordPress.

[sanil09]

Great site and good design, the color is a little messy. Try to change the colors and make it more atractive and easy to read.. Also it's on a subdomain which is not really advice if you are willing to keep it for a long time. You forgot to put ref link on the second one

thanks

[presli]

Hahaha, sorry but i've never noticed the "thanks" button before, if i've seen it before, i would hitted it for sure :P Anyway thx for the wordpress advice again - i had it in my mind already. I even downloaded it a couple a days ago but it still staying on my desktop uninstalled, but as soon as i get a couple of free days i will try to explore it and do my best making a new site ( still waiting for an inspiration tho :P )

@ Sanil09 - i haven't forgot to put the ref link, because i did it on purpose I am doing a banner exchange with this site and i received more then 12 000 free visitors from them so far and i am keep getting more thenn 200+ from them. Thats a pretty good deal for me :}

[Kay]

Hahaha, sorry but i've never noticed the "thanks" button before, if i've seen it before, i would hitted it for sure :P Anyway thx for the wordpress advice again - i had it in my mind already. I even downloaded it a couple a days ago but it still staying on my desktop uninstalled, but as soon as i get a couple of free days i will try to explore it and do my best making a new site ( still waiting for an inspiration tho :P )

@ Sanil09 - i haven't forgot to put the ref link, because i did it on purpose I am doing a banner exchange with this site and i received more then 12 000 free visitors from them so far and i am keep getting more thenn 200+ from them. Thats a pretty good deal for me :}

You're welcome! I have a number of WordPress sites so just holler if you need any help with it. If you decide what kind of template style you've got in mind, let me know and I'll try point you in the direction of a few good freebies that may suit.

Sounds like that banner exchange is working out great for you, congrats! It would be nice if you could share the story of all that in the General Marketing section and give us all hints how you did it. That way it wouldn't get buried amongst this thread.