Drawing

[Postuleit]

comments are appreciated

[imported_Jumanji]

Not as good as it could have been. I understand the concept you were going for, but you didn't pull it off too well.

It'd be better if you'd gone for a more vectory look. Something you could actually draw, instead of C4Ds. Another thing is the composition. Not only is the focal point centered, but there's an unexplainable gap between her and the C4Ds.

[its for reihl]

the random horizontal lines throws off the whole sig for me

[imported_Jumanji]

I believe they're there to make it seem like a drawing on lined paper.

By the way, would you mind sharing the stock?

[imported_TheOne]

I see the concept, but it isn't well executed. I totally agree with Jumanji, redo the tag with the same concept, except vector it instead of making a tag with horizontal lines on it. Even go the whole 9 yards and download a paper texture.

[Postuleit]

here you go jummy just for you <3


and v2



well?

[imported_danny]

i see where you was going with this one but it didnt come out right...
it a good thing people trying new things !!!!
the text could use some work...

keep working on it if you still have .psd try an not over do it tho

Yes v2 a little better ! but the color try an keep it one color.

[imported_Jumanji]

Thanks. And that&#39;s way better, but it&#39;s still not there yet.

[Postuleit]

how about now?

[imported_TheOne]

I like V2 better.