Death Note

[Fiery]

Agreed, like pretty much everyone else said, it's hard to find a focal. That black stuff on the left side is really distracting, definitely clean that up a bit. There's not too much flow either, so definitely try to fix that up. Otherwise, not bad entirely, just keep working!

[imported_Storm]

Huh what black stuff lmao i don't know what ur talking about u mean where the green thing is?

[RaRe]

Oh, shit.

I was going to rip this.

[imported_Jumanji]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Storm @ Dec 22 2008, 09:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

Ok no offense to anyone but how come you say the focal is off? I tried to make the focal rly good bc the stock had weird lighting, so i darkened the edges and close to the focal and brightened up everywhere else lol. Well i admit the c4ds are covering allot that was a big mistake. But i still think the focal is fine and well i guess there isn&#39;t much depth if any lol another big bo bo lmao and also another big bo bo is that its like one of my only small sigs my sigs are usually default size 400x150 so yeh....[/b]

The problem with the focal point is the following. It is only logical that the focus of signatures are the renders. You have Light in your signature, so we logically assume that that should be the main focal point. However, you&#39;ve blurred him completely, and right next to him, and even partially on top of him, put a really sharp C4D.

Some people can make render signatures without the actual render being the focal point, but in this case, you didn&#39;t succeed that well.

[imported_Storm]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Jumanji @ Dec 24 2008, 04:20 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

Some people can make render signatures without the actual render being the focal point, but in this case, you didn&#39;t succeed that well.[/b]

Oh i see what use mean now, well that makes perfect sense :mellow:

[imported_Jumanji]

Your feeble attempt at sarcastic humor fails to amuse.

[Mohamed]

Its really kind of plain. But the blending is nice.

[imported_Storm]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Jumanji @ Dec 24 2008, 07:03 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

Your feeble attempt at sarcastic humor fails to amuse.[/b]

Sarcastic humor???? i wasn&#39;t joking man i was serious.....
Ty mohamed

[imported_Jumanji]

Oh. Good for you then.