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Junior Member
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It's really random.
It doesn't get the point across very easily.
All I get is it's some sort of meeting at 410 west d st
Is it a concert? is it a help group?
you need to better define what it is you're selling, or more or less, what you're client is selling.
honestly, In my personal opinion as a contracted designer on more than one occasion, this would not do coming from me.
but i don't know how experienced you are, so i'll stop. 
Plus, it just looks like a bunch of brushes, which is copyright infringement in most cases for commercial work.
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Forum Guru
It's not really built right.. it seems everything is just pasted on to eachother not much flow is going on in this one..
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Junior Member
i agree with everything stated. this is really the first large work i have ever done. yes they are brushes and i wouldn't know who to give credit to anyways lol. but i figured i would take a stab at it, looked at other posters and thats the idea i got.... but if i do anymore ill post them to see if i am getting any better
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Guru In Training
this looks great! good for a concert flyer, I have a lot of buddies in bands that always ask for stuff like this but im so busy I dont have time to do them, maybe after you do a few more ill send them towards your way ^^
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Forum Guru
Liquid just keep at it, your have good ideas.
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Hey liquid, it looks pretty good man, i can see it on a bulletin and it seems like the message gets across to the right crowd. And did you make those brushes?
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Junior Member
no sadly :/ im starting to make my own brushes tho, ive made a few patterns and im about to start to learn to make brushes
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