My new poem :)

[yatz]

When you said, “I love you,”
I went over the moon.
My heart sang its glory,
The stars sang in tune.
As when with a word
God brought forth light,
So with these words
You ended my night.

So with these words
You made something new:
A bond of devotion
Between me and you.

How powerful words
To shape who we are!
We ponder in silence;
Our words cross a bar.

Your words crossed a threshold
And entered the past,
Yet they have created
A world that will last.

wish you all like it !!

[Swastik A]

WOW :O..That was amazing! Great work Yatz.I loved it

[digitalconfusion]

LMFAO!! Wow, first when you try to copy + paste poems, please make sure you edit it. -.o Don't embarrass yourself like that. I highlighted "I went over the moon." and got this on google. ->http://www.myhappylove.com/lyrics/lo...e-you-280.html
The same whole poem is there and I know it's not you.

When you said, “I love you,”
I went over the moon.
My heart sang its glory,
The stars sang in tune.
As when with a word
God brought forth light,
So with these words
You ended my night.

So with these words
You made something new:
A bond of devotion
Between me and you.

How powerful words
To shape who we are!
We ponder in silence;
Our words cross a bar.

Your words crossed a threshold
And entered the past,
Yet they have created
A world that will last.

wish you all like it !!

[Thanoz.]

Very nice!
Imho these could be as well great lyrics for a song...so think of that option

[SkyNetHosting]

LMFAO!! Wow, first when you try to copy + paste poems, please make sure you edit it. -.o Don't embarrass yourself like that. I highlighted "I went over the moon." and got this on google. ->[myhappy love.com/lyrics/love-poems/when-you-said-i-love-you -280"]hmyhappylove.com/lyrics/love-poems/when-you-said-i-love-you-280.html[/URL]
The same whole poem is there and I know it's not you.

Have he even mentioned that he wrote it by him self? I guess not so I don't think there's a reason for embarrassment

[yatz]

I pick poems, whats the embarrassing you talk about ?
Anyways i write poems also, but will be posted soon as i didn't copy them to the laptop yet, and how i write poems ? cause i learn from others, by searching for good poems like this one

[panam_sp]

Oh my heart...this poem disturbing my hear....