My first flash animation

[jorik]

hey guys!
Please this review my first flash animation.
it is located in here:
http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?i...teffectcj6.swf
Thanks

[MissM]

heyy... i quite like this animation! i like the colour red! i think it works well. i also like the way it fades in and out, and the stripey effect thingy, it looks great 10/10

[addik]

Purty nice actually. Quite good for your first flash animation. Did you learn that from a tutorial or just experimented it yourself. I thought that kind of animation would be good for banners. Good job on your first animation. Rating it 8/10.

[hanna]

its nice :smile2: though perhaps you could have cut away some of the extra space? nice color, and i like that there is something sort of in the background of the letters moving when its fading away. dont know way, i just like it :P
great job for being your first. and i hope to see more of your work when you are a bit more experienced. :thumbup:

[missemmawatson]

it looks pretty good and simple. how long have you been using flash? i hear its pretty hard and from what i see it looks like you can use it pretty well. i tried it once but it didnt really work out so well

[roy77]

very nice! i like how the affect is going one way, and than the other! nice one! it will look amazing for a flash movie / game introsuction - like the loading page. 10/10 - i will sure to contact u in the future regards flash intro. animations
peace

[Darth_DUB]

looks very nice for your first one. the transition is very good and the stuff in the background of the the text looks very cool. the only thing i see wrong would be that the text is off center but it's not that big of a deal for somthing like this. 9/10 keep up the good work.

[Gam-Man]

Looks good, interesting use of the mask. You might try bumping up your FPS to 20 or so to smooth out the animation, or for a little added effect, add motion blur.

Looks good for #1. Keep at it!

[ivenms]

Nothing much on the flash rather than a simple animation on the text. It is achieved only with the help of the software you used for the flash animation. I think it is some software of adobe/macromedia.

Any way, nice work on bigning.

[quatrux]

As for your first flash animation it is quite good, even though it is primitive, but with time you can learn to do much more advanced things.