Salesletter Critique

[AlanC]

Do you have a salesletter you'd like critiqued?

Post or link it and I'll chew it a little...



Alan C.

[AlanC]

OK, I'll nibble gently..?

Or am I the only copywriter on the board?


Alan C.

[donald]

Do you have a salesletter you'd like critiqued?

Post or link it and I'll chew it a little...



Alan C.

hi AlanC.....
what do you want to clear..........?
what are you telling about....?
do not understand your post........
.........CONFUSED..........

[AlanC]

I mean have you written some text, in hope of selling something, and would you like it checked by a professional copywriter, ie me?



AC

[Kay]

That's a very kind offer Alan has made. Don't miss out on this chance to have your sales pitch looked over by a professional.

[splitbamboo]

My word doc is too large to post. I'd love to take you up on this. Can I email it to you?