please review my blog

[distantship]

Please review my blog at EditionsArthenon - My web surfing adventures and daily musings
my intention was to get in pay to blog system but no luck..I've submitted it a week ago and haven't get any reply, so, any suggestions for me to improve it before re-submitting would be great! thanks in advance!

[Kay]

distantship, your blog looks good. What I'd suggest is that you break up your long paragraphs a bit for easier reading. About six or seven lines at the most will help it. I find it's more important to do that when you have a dark background to stop it feeling claustrophobic. Any luck yet with the acceptance?

[redirection]

great site. you aim different readers such as graphic artist, e-commerce store owner and online marketeers.

[pakexperts]

i have check your blog. its nice blog. chekc this site, plz make it some clour full and some good.

[rockon]

Found a cool Baby Name!
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this all catagories are nice but i would like to tell you that you that there is overuse of black background in your blog..
if you can plz make it somewhat soft...

[rockon]

Found a cool Baby Name!
Gadgets for free
Displays to your benefit
Have a great approach at trade shows
Health matters are important
Make money with Google
this all catagories are nice but i would like to tell you that you that there is overuse of black background in your blog..
if you can plz make it somewhat soft...

[mayerli]

hey distantship, your blog doesn't look bad! However, i think the background on the top part of the blog looks far better than the black/white once you scroll down... its not all that eye-friendly. Also the blog description below the white blog title in the upper left area needs to be changed to white/grey... right now its black on dark background which is not the best choice!

[rockon]

Found a cool Baby Name!
Gadgets for free
Displays to your benefit
Have a great approach at trade shows
Health matters are important
Make money with Google
this all catagories are nice but i would like to tell you that you that there is overuse of black background in your blog..
if you can plz make it somewhat soft...

[viraj_zaveri]

you have made a nice blog,but it look a little bit clumsy and old fashioned,i think you should improve that.Best of luck.

i again checked your blog.
I found gadgets pretty cool.
Nice babies name.
But background is so dark,you should make it soft.

[rockon]

Displays to your benefit
Have a great approach at trade shows
Health matters are important
Make money with Google
this all catagories are nice but i would like to tell you that you that there is overuse of black background in your blog..
if you can plz make it somewhat soft...
i again checked your blog.
I found gadgets pretty cool.
Nice babies names..